Could someone edit the article to me please?
This is the first day I write the English diary.And today I am not algebra class line is annoying because I had a bad cold when I up.It is perfect as we had a TV today that the school have been bought us.Although all afternoon, we will not watch all the time without having to read the magazine called National Georgphic study.I spend too much time looking in the dictionary. I wrote three sentences long, and rightly so, please check? I am a Chinese student who want to improve my help if you want English.if Please contact me.my MSN: Many viviangycs@hotmail.com Thank you. I'm in a hurry.
This is the first day that a newspaper wrote in English. Today, I'm not online algebra class, which is annoying because I had a bad cold when I woke. Ideally, the school bought a TV. Even if it was all afternoon, there will be while learning. I read a magazine National Geographic called, I spent much time looking in the dictionary. I would be very happy to help you learn English! You can send an email to guillotinequeen1@yahoo.com Good luck!
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